Richard
wrote to the New World Finn
recently and remarked, "I had a couple of free hours so I spent
them translating this story. These stories of Joenpolvi really get to
me, but Im not sure how others will react to them."
This
Matti Joenpolvi story is a wonderful example of Richard's translations.
Cumulus
by Matti Joenpolvi
translated by
Richard Impola
He was dissatisfied with August, a month from which for some reason
he expected the most. The beginning of the month was rainy. Only with
the coming of the full moon did the days become high, transparent, and
blue.
From a flat railroad
yard, train tracks ran into a cut carved through a rocky outcropping.
On the horizon at its north end, a high cumulus cloud had developed.
The effect was strange; the stem of the cloud seemed to be caught in
a rugged grip, as if it had ventured too low and been trapped by the
cut.
He gazed at it.
It seemed as if he were seeing a black spot on the wrinkled flank of
the cloud. The air around him seemed to grow thinner, he felt dizzy,
it was hard to breathe. The feeling changed quickly to a faint sensation,
the spot on the wrinkled side of the cloud disappeared, it developed
a ribbony tail and vanished from sight the way an occasional faulty
image disappears from the retina. He felt freer than he had for a long
time, he couldnt remember when and where it was a mere
sensation, only a left-over feeling, from a moment, or from his entire
lifetime. He thought that from the crest of the cumulus cloud, you might
be able to see far into the coming autumn.
Women carrying vegetable
baskets and plastic shopping bags came toward him from the open-air
market. Many of them went into automobiles parked along the promenade.
A dark-haired man was leaving against a door frame of a Greek restaurant.
The light over the door was still burning although it was bright midday.
Retirees were hanging
out on the fringe of the marketplace near the sausage booths. They were
there on every market day. They seemed uncertain about what to do with
the remaining days of their lives. At the corner of an abandoned, rotting
sales table a miserable-looking bum sat slumped over. One of the retirees
handed him a piece of sausage. The bum thanked the man with a glance.
He joined the crowd
in the marketplace and tried to see if mounds of peas had appeared on
the sales tables yet. Turnips there were, potatoes, carrots, beets,
and thin radishes. Apples! Good apples. Pale, transparent. Taste
them!
The girl had a sensitive face and looked as if she might burst into
tears at any moment. The hand offering the apple was narrow and slim-fingered.
As he ate the apple
he began a discussion with the girl. He asked about the years
crop. He himself knew its quality and size; the branches of the trees
in the orchard at home were bent down with the weight of the fruit.
They had to be propped up. There would be problems in using up the crop
this year too. He could already see himself at the juicing stand crunching
and pressing the apples. It would be September or the start of October.
He would carry the plastic bags stuffed full of what was left after
the squeezing, and the outdoor air would cool his brow, telling him
that another year was over. The stupidest thing he could do at the market
was to buy apples from that girl.
As he listened to
her, everything seemed to change in a remarkable way. It was a good,
expansive, inward feeling. He looked at the northern sky to see the
cumulus cloud, but the high buildings around the marketplace concealed
it from sight. Not a single thing around him had the same effect as
it had had a minute ago. People, vegetables, doves, and seagulls, the
sales tables grayed by the weather, even the cobblestones of the marketplace
-- it was as if he were seeing them for the first time. As if he had
stepped from outer darkness and solitude into an intensive, shared life
in a warm, brightly lighted interior to ask: Is this what the world
is like? It felt as if the brief internal spent with the girl had lasted
for years.
He bought a kilo
of apples from her, counting out the coins one by one into the palm
of her hand. It was a cool, slightly moist hand, like the side of a
fruit early in the morning. Her arm caught his eye. Pale, transparent,
he thought.
The marketplace
was crowded with people, but they were somehow insubstantial so that
one could make his way through them. He did so, the bag of apples in
one hand and the apple core in the other. He was afraid somehow. What
was happening? He looked around for the coffee shop at the edge of the
marketplace, where the market vendors were wont to go.
The hose came from the dimness of an interior courtyard through an archway.
The water from it struck the sidewalk and ran in a reddish stream to
be swallowed up by a manhole. A coveralled man held the spray nozzle.
Real estate custodian. The words were printed on the back of his orange
coveralls. The tops of his rubber boots, gleaming with newness, reflected
the life of the street -- bypassers who, dodging the water, hurried
on their way, their minds on the days important affairs.
Seeing him stop,
the man looked again, now in a more friendly way, perhaps because someone
was showing an interest in his monotonous work. The dead mans
button. Do you know what that is? The red smear was washed off
the asphalt, and he thought a pail of paint had fallen onto it.
Juvonen used
to be a locomotive engineer, the custodian went on, while he was
still thinking about the question. His last job was driving a
rail bus.The flow of water stopped. The pressure put a strain
on the hose, but it withstood the strain. The custodian got out a pack
of cigarettes from the lower pocket of his coveralls, the hose hanging
doubled over his arm.
They have
only the driver in the cab. The dead mans button is a switch down
at the drivers feet. You have to keep your foot on it when driving.
If something happens to the driver, say an attack of illness, his foot
stops pressing and the emergency brake goes on automatically. Thats
how its been worked out.
The sun shifted
in the sky and drew the shadow of the building closer to its wall. The
asphalt revealed alongside it began to steam. The smell was sickening-sweet.
Once when
Juvonen was driving, they saw him rush from the drivers to the
passenger compartment and throw himself headlong to the floor. The vehicle
stopped in time, the passengers must have been a little bit scared.
When Juvonen was looking for his hat and the conductor arrived on the
scene, he explained that he had been practicing. As they were approaching
an overpass, he thought about what he should do if a logging truck appeared
from the side and stopped dead in front of him.
And it worked.
That time.
A trick like that. He experienced it so vividly that he saw the non-existent
truck. But the truck was traveling only in his mind. They say that earlier
hed seen things that others hadnt.
At the edge of the
marketplace a man was hoisting netting sacks of root vegetables into
a panel truck. The custodians eyes seemed to be focusing on that
action.
He finished
driving that run back to the station, with the conductor close by his
side, though. And he didnt see any trucks after that. It was his
last shift on the job. They put an immediate stop to his driving.
The custodian pressed
the trigger of the pistol spray-nozzle and adjusted the force of the
spray. Again the water struck the asphalt and again it was dyed and
disappeared into the grid of the manhole cover.
This is Juvonens
blood, he said over his shoulder. He landed there an hour
and a half ago from the balcony on the sixth floor. I wonder what he
saw there.
He did not go for coffee, nor were his feelings the same as he wandered
down the lanes between the marketplace tables. Apples! Good apples.
Pale, transparent. Taste them!
The girl looked
at him from in back of her mountain of apples with no hint of recognition.
It took a minute for him to be sure: she no longer knew him! Near the
kiosk, at the corner of the rotting sales table, sat the same wretched
bum, as much a reject from lifes happenings as the place where
he sat. The group of retirees had thinned out.
He set the bag of
apples down beside the man, who lifted his eyes from the doves hopping
busily on the cobblestones, but there was no message in them.
Later, gazing down
along the railway cut through the rocky outcropping, he saw that the
high pillar of clouds had disappeared from the northern sky.
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